I'd really appreciate feedback on this, and don't hold back; whatever you think, feel. I'm considering using it for my latest MA assignment and any comments will form part of the critique. It's not written by me, but is harvested and assembled from a google search to 'create' this textual performance poem.
EVERYONE
IS
THE
CORRECT VERSION
EVERYONE
SOUNDS
LIKE
A LOT OF
PEOPLE
BUT
BY THE
SAME TOKEN
SAYING
EVERYONE HERE IS REALLY EXCITED
SOUNDS
WRONG TO ME
EVERYONE
IS
EVERYBODY
IS
EVERYTHING
IS
THEY
THEIR
THEM
EVERYONE
IS
SINGULAR
PEOPLE
ALSO ASK
ARE
EVERYONE?
OR
IS
EVERYONE?
ANYBODY
ANYONE
EACH
EITHER
EVERYBODY
EVERYONE
EVERYTHING
NEITHER
NONE
NO-ONE
SOMEONE
SOMETHING
NO-ONE OR
ANYONE
ARE
SINGULAR
EVERYONE
IS
DIRTY
EVERYONE
IS
GAY
EVERYONE
IS
WATCHING
EVERYONE
IS
MAKING
EVERYONE
IS
OR ARE
EVERYONE
HAS
OR HAVE
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Basically, we're all the same and yet unique. That's what I'm getting from this. Makes sense. All the stuff that's going on at the moment and all the subjective opinions....Read Crime and punishment if you haven't already Jonna. The epilogue deals with this very subject and the conflicts that can arise from it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Barry, I always appreciate your comments. I've got my assignment reading to do right now so will have a look after.
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