She walked with a confident
stride,
her long legs spaced quite
far apart with each step,for a woman I thought.
That's what caught my attention.
I watched from the bus stop
across the road
the large shop windows seemed
to frame each step,like those slow motion camera stills we used to see.
She had long legs and was
obviously tall
slim legs but not skinny -
blue jeans -and long brown boots that came to just below her knees.
She walked with a confident
stride
and there was strength in her
legs,those long legs,
long slim legs ending in long brown leather boots.
I watched her from across the
road
as her long legs took her
confidently forwardto wherever she was going,
her long slim legs walking,
marching almost,
framed by the shop windows as she passed them.
She walked with a confident
stride
carried along by her long
legs,her long slim legs.
There was power in her legs,
her long, slim legs,and I liked her....
I remember this from open mic :)
ReplyDeleteYes indeed Lucy Lou x x
DeleteI particularly liked this one especially the last line "and I liked her" - it tied up the whole package very neatly without excess baggage - I'm sure I can see her too in my minds eye.....
ReplyDeleteThanks Mark I appreciate that...
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